Steinbeck's trip abroad
posted May 18, 2012
March 8, 1962
Dear Edith Mirrielees:
I am delighted that your volume Story Writing is going into a paperback edition. It will reach a far larger audience, and that is a good thing. It may not teach the reader how to write a good story, but it will surely help him to recognize one when he reads it.
Although it must be a thousand years ago that I sat in your class in story writing at Stanford, I remember the experience very clearly. I was bright-eyed and bushy-brained and prepared to absorb from you the secret formula for writing good short stories, even great short stories.
You canceled this illusion very quickly. The only way to write a good short story, you said, was to write a good short story. Only after it is written can it be taken apart to see how it was done. It is a most difficult form, you told us, and the proof lies in how very few great short stories there are in the world.
The basic rule you gave us was simple and heartbreaking. A story to be effective had to convey something from writer to reader and the power of its offering was the measure of its excellence. Outside of that, you said, there were no rules. A story could be about anything and could use any means and technique at all—so long as it was effective.
As a subhead to this rule, you maintained that it seemed to be necessary for the writer to know what he wanted to say, in short, what he was talking about. As an exercise we were to try reducing the meat of a story to one sentence, for only then could we know it well enough to enlarge it to three or six or ten thousand words.
So there went the magic formula, the secret ingredient. With no more than that you set us on the desolate lonely path of the writer. And we must have turned in some abysmally bad stories. If I had expected to be discovered in a full bloom of excellence, the grades you gave my efforts quickly disillusioned me. And if I felt unjustly criticized, the judgments of editors for many years afterwards upheld your side, not mine.
It seemed unfair. I could read a fine story and could even know how it was done, thanks to your training. Why could I not do it myself? Well, I couldn't, and maybe it's because no two stories dare be alike. Over the years I have written a great many stories and I still don't know how to go about it except to write it and take my chances.
If there is a magic in story writing, and I am convinced that there is, no one has ever been able to reduce it to a recipe that can be passed from one person to another. The formula seems to lie solely in the aching urge of the writer to convey something he feels important to the reader. If the writer has that urge, he may sometimes but by no means always find the way to do it.
It is not so very hard to judge a story after it is written, but after many years, to start a story still scares me to death. I will go so far as to say that the writer who is not scared is happily unaware of the remote and tantalizing majesty of the medium.
I wonder whether you will remember one last piece of advice you gave me. It was during the exuberance of the rich and frantic twenties and I was going out into that world to try to be a writer.
You said, "It's going to take a long time, and you haven't any money. Maybe it would be better if you could go to Europe."
"Why?" I asked.
"Because in Europe poverty is a misfortune, but in America it is shameful. I wonder whether or not you can stand the shame of being poor."
It wasn't too long afterwards that the depression came down. Then everyone was poor and it was no shame any more. And so I will never know whether or not I could have stood it. But surely you were right about one thing, Edith. It took a long time—a very long time. And it is still going on and it has never got easier. You told me it wouldn't.
John Steinbeck
(Source: Story Writing, by Edith Ronald Mirrielees; via Letters of Note).
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Intent, by Amelia Klein
posted May 16, 2012
Not by me: borrowed from the Beloit Poetry Journal, 62.04.
Then, overnight,
new leaves, their newness
astonishing as a stranger's
trust. And again it seems
possible to live
differently, my mind
veined with green as a blackbird
chases his shadow
back and forth between
the walls. Simplicity,
intention wedded perfectly
to action, lines
of current, lines
of flight. The bird, the human
and what the human makes,
all hierarchies washed out
beneath the leaves. Until I
build them up again.
I have no choice:
I choose. All summer long,
I constellate the shadows
as the slur of pollen falls.
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two laptop notes
posted May 3, 2012
Found tidying my desktop sticky notes.
(i.) There is something in me that resembles a small, thrashing bird. It is very close to my heart; sometimes I even confuse it for such, but it is something else. It was put there. I often wish it weren't, but really I'm not sure whether it would be better or worse if it were gone. Probably it would be worse. Everybody needs something thrashing inside. It was put there and now it throngs.
(ii.) Chi va con lo zoppo impara a zoppicare.